Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Friday, December 18, 2015

Both for War

It was an old houseone story, brick exterior, paint peeling off the walls. There was nothing quite remarkable about itpeople drove past it every day without ever thinking that something would happen there.

The owner was never around. The house was almost always deserted. It was perfect for the man in the grey suit.

The man was tall, had a dusky complexion and silvery grey hair. His arms bulged. He didn’t look like he belonged in the grey suit, rather in a tee-shirt or climbing a mountain. His advisors were hardly typical either. They wore conservative suits, each with a little flair to them: yellow handkerchief, white socks, odd hat.

At a table they satpapers shuffling, keys being hit at breakneck pace. Click-clack, click-clack, clickety-clack. The man kept dictating the speech. His advisors were tired, stunned. What had made their boss in the grey suit so confident to write like this? Never before had he displayed such an aptitude for words. Click-clack, click-clack, clickety-clack. It was just an announcement of a candidacy. He was talking so fast that he was almost incoherent. Click-clack, click-clack, clickety-clack. The speech was done, printed, prepared. The man’s characteristic pertinacity shone through in every line.

As they were leaving, the man slipped away and threw a scrap of paper into the fire; it was never to be seen. The source of the words that had shocked his advisors would be lost forever.

The man in the grey suit whom the passerbys had not noticed would soon be surrounded by an entirely different complement dressed in black. And people would only need to see the head of the motorcade to know who was coming. No one knew what was written on the scrap of paper that had started it. Those three words, so simple, that started a hurricane. Three words. “Both for war.”

And the old house, the one which nobody ever noticed, would soon belong in the Smithsonian.

~ Rohit N.

5 comments:

  1. Wow! This a great piece of writing, and I can tell that you worked hard on your word choices! I am very curious as to what will happen in the old house... And I am dying to know what "Both for War" meant!

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  2. The description and detail is great, it helps you imagine what it really looks like!

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  3. This is a great piece of writing. The amount of detail you put in really helps visualize what the character and the setting is. I would really love to know how you connected the piece of writing to the title and what happens in the house!

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  4. Wow. It's very descriptive. I love how your piece builds.

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  5. This is a very well done piece of writing. I like how you structured the story. It makes you want to keep reading.

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