Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Friday, December 18, 2015

Pressure

You enter the court, not knowing anything about your opponent. You have fifteen minutes to warm up, and learn about your opponent across the net. Whether he likes to place the ball crosscourt or down the line; whether he likes to put spin on the ball or if he slices it. Before you realize it fifteen minutes is over, and you are ready to endure the long match. The pressure is on.

The only thing blocking you from victory is the net. It’s the first serve and you prepare yourself for an arduous match. You try to preserve your tenacity by forcefully hitting the ball back across the net. Not so hard that the ball will go out, but with enough spin and force to set your opponent off course. One ball to the net, and you are done. The pressure is on.

It’s halfway into the match, and your muscles ache. You think you’re getting into a rhythm, until your opponent hits a drop shot, and throws you off balance. The score is equal. You have won one close set, and your opponent another close set. You receive an injunction from your coach, not to let your guard down, and to keep fighting. You feel the last burst of energy rushing through your veins, you are ready to win the set, and be victorious. The pressure is on.

The last set arrives. You have had enough, and you want to win. You have proved your aptitude to your opponent. Everything is going for you. You have just won five straight games. You only need to win one more game to win the set. It is match point, and it is your serve. You blast the serve with so much power your opponent’s racket does not make contact with the ball. You stand there in awe. It’s finally over. As you rush over to shake the hand of your opponent you are ecstatic, it’s finally over, and you have won. The pressure is gone.

~ Lysander M.

10 comments:

  1. Fantastic work Lysander, I really Liked the descriptive words, and nice work for making the story flow nicely.
    -Ben Steer

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  2. Yay, no more pressure. I liked it. It was good.

    - Declan

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  3. Good job Lysander. This is very well written and I like how you repeat the pressure is on and end with the pressure is gone.

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  4. Your description makes it sound it really intense. Nice work.

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  5. I never knew how playing tennis really felt inside, but after reading this, I have a sense of what tennis really feels like.

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  6. It was very interesting how you switched between describing and being in the moment. It provided a contrast.

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  7. I like how you describe the pressure weighing on you

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  8. This story tells me more about how it feels to play tennis with a good description. Great work.

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  9. Nice job man. Like how you express yourself to make it clear that you are under pressure that you can't deal with but eventually succeed.

    Nice one.

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  10. I really like how you described how happy you were once the pressure was of. Good job

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