Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Thursday, December 17, 2015

The Trunk

Ollie and I, and both of our families, were on a walk. Ollie and I were running around at the front; I yelled back to my mom, “Ollie and I are going to run ahead, OK?” and then ran off, without waiting for a response.

We ran, and ran, and ran, until we got back to the parking lot.

“What do we do now?” I asked. Ollie came up with the brilliant idea of hiding in the trunk of the car. He said it would be fun, but within 5 minutes I was asleep.

Some time later, I woke up to Ollie poking me excitedly (which was a little worrying).

“Look! Look! Look! It’s a police officer! There is another one! Dan, Look! Look! That’s so cool!”

I was thinking more along the lines of “Oh jeez…”, even if I didn’t say it. I did say, “Those police officers are pretty inept, why haven’t they looked in the car yet.They need to show more tenacity, they should have fo…”

“Shhhh! They’re coming! Get down!” The police officers were checking cars, as if I had jinxed it. We were sitting inside the trunk, Ollie and I waiting for the officers to open it up. We couldn't see, so when the door opened, I almost had a heart attack, even though I was 7.

The officer took one look at us, and said,

“We’ve been looking for you, you pertinacious rascals.”

~ Dan A.

5 comments:

  1. I liked the description and the punctuation in your story.

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  2. very suspenseful

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  3. I liked your vocab use.
    EC

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  4. Your sense of passing time in the story is really good. It's not choppy at all.

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  5. I liked you choice of words to describe the feelings the characters felt in the story.

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