The hounds barking at me, trying to sniff me out. The roar of the waterfall up ahead. Could I jump? More importantly, would I jump? The moonlight flickering between the tree branches and leaves as I ran towards the cliff's edge. Louder barking. Men laughing. Horses neighing. My quiet panting breaths. The silent crunching of the dry leaves beneath my feet.
The water was beautiful at night. The moonshine reflecting off of the crashing water beneath. What lay in the turmoil? Vicious sea monsters? Or just sand and rocks?
No time to dwell. Hearing the men shout out ‘there she is!’.
One.
Two.
Three.
The rush of the wind as I dropped.
The plunging feeling in my stomach as I fell. Possibly to my own demise.
The numbness I felt as I had struck the water. The scratching it made as the hard surface broke my fall. I had rested on the surface of the water for a moment, and then it shattered. I fell through, the numbness but a distant memory.
I remember forgetting about the men with weapons above. I couldn’t hear them anymore... I hadn’t wanted to hear them anymore. I knew I had to get out of the water;, the growing frosty cold of the moving water hit me.
Yet I wasn’t able to move. I drifted out to sea. No longer caring if the men found me or not. I just floated, bobbing up and down. My body slowly grew colder... colder… colder. Slower... slower. I had become tired all of a sudden, the stamina from the adventure had worn off long ago.
No longer worrying about what lay beneath the unrest ocean.
My eyes closed, the moon disappearing, only a far away memory, out of reach. My breathing slowed.
And then I was washed away in the ocean, letting the darkness drag me away with it.
~ Marie A.
I really liked the form of your vignette. It made the story even more interesting and realistic.
ReplyDeleteYou made this story very realistic and I really enjoyed reading.
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very deep? good description. i'm sort of hoping this isn't based on a true story. why men? why not women? women are super strong.
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That was sad... and emotional... and powerful... all in good way, so great job!
ReplyDeleteThat was intense! Overall, wonderful
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