Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Thursday, December 17, 2015

Angus

It was the day, about 6 years ago, that my life changed forever.

In 2009, I was about 7 and my brother, David, was 17, almost heading off for college. My family and I, my Mom, Dad, and Sister, went to visit David. David lived on our family farm in Middleburg, Virginia.

Just as we were about to turn into onto our farm, we saw my brother’s truck, a white Ford F-150 with blue stripes, pull out of the farm next to ours. Inside the truck we saw my brother, a huge beast of a person whom you could never miss, and next to him a 2 week old puppy named Luther. Luther was as happy as ever, hanging his head out the window.

Luther was an English black lab born on the farm next to ours. He had 4 brothers and 2 sisters, all born on the same day. All had been sold but one, the runt of the litter.

Subsequently we went to see the puppies, for my 4 year old sister loved fluffy animals, as does every child. Not all of the puppies had been taken to their new families yet. When we entered the farm, there they were, happy as ever but terribly misbehaved. All of the puppies were running around with their mom, for their dad was elsewhere. Not all of the puppies were black like their mom - some were brown and others were white.

All of Luther’s siblings were in a commodious pen, like pigs - but not Angus... Angus had escaped the pen and was running with the horses in the field. After the first 20 minutes playing with him, it already felt like Angus was ours. It was not our intent to bring a dog home with us, but we did, and it was the single best decision our family has ever made.

Back at our farm, we saw Luther frolicking in the field but with another dog. The dog, like Angus and Luther, was a small black lab puppy. Little did we know that David’s cousin, Sam, had also gotten a dog from the same litter. His name was Rufus. Later when we were having lunch, Rufus was under the table, ready to eat any scrabs that fell.

Now, 6 and a half years later, all three dogs are still together. For a couple years, Rufus lived in Mississippi while Sam attended college, but now Sam moved back to Middleburg to pursue his dream of owning a brewery. When the dogs were smaller and you put all three together, you could not tell them apart; so we put different colored bandanas on them. Angus had red, Luther had green, and Rufus had Blue. After all of these years the three dogs now have their differences. Angus is fit and thin, Luther is thick and strong, and Rufus is big and fat.

As these 6 years passed nothing has changed: Angus wears his red bandana, Luther wears his green bandana, and Rufus wears his blue bandana. Luther still hangs his head out of the window of the truck, Rufus still eats anything he finds, and Angus still is the same escape artist he was 6 years ago.

~ Jack Ste.

6 comments:

  1. I like your connection between your dogs then and now.
    -Nick S

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  2. I like all the detail you put in the story to really learn about angus.

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  3. This is really good. I like how you kind of skipped to the future.

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  4. I like how you started the story with how your brother got a black lab, then you got one. I also like how much detail you put into describing the dogs.

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  5. I like how you talk about the dogs in their later years at the end of the story.

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  6. I like the ending were you talk about about the dogs staying the same six years later.

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