But, in the morning, a big yellow bus comes and takes the kids away; while in the meantime, I am left with only my mom to play with.
Peering through the window, I am left looking out into the distance as the big yellow bus drives away. My slobber rushing down the clear glass windows; my wagging tail slowly becoming slower and slower.
Then, I am left with only my mommy to play with. However, when she often times leaves the house for the day, I am left with many mischievous things to do in this commodium home. I launch myself up onto the tables like a rocket to eat scraps off the counter. My favorites are the old rotting bananas, and the petals of the dying flowers. I sneak into the bedrooms and chew up the smelly socks, and sweaty clothes. I also sneak into the hidden closets and hide my new meat bones - just for safe keeping. That way, no one can ever steal them.
But then, when my mommy and the kids return home for the night, it’s time for my play time!! And the next day, it all repeats over again.
~ Annika R.
Cody!!!! Great use of verbs such as whipping,launching, and sneaking. I also really like the simile you used to describe cody launching up to the table. Well Done! -Your Brother
ReplyDeleteGreat job!!! I liked how you compared cody to a rocket! Also nice use of vocab words!- Fleming
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. You describe what the dog is like so well and you make the reader wondering is it even about a dog which is interesting.
ReplyDeleteI like how you get the reader to wonder what really goes on in their dog's head while they aren't home.
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