Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Thursday, December 17, 2015

California Woods

Sonoma, California. We called mom, dad, and Kendall. Hike? Nicole (our family friend) asked. Sure they said. We got ready, all in our exercise clothes.

We waited for my family to show up. In the car, we drove to the entrance to the park. We got out and walked. Up through the path until we were dumped into the huge trail of rocks, trees, animals, and the hot sun.

It was beautiful. I could smell the freshness of the woods. We walked up the path, higher up the mountain. The gravel crunched beneath our feet. After a while of walking, we were placed down the hill again. Gravel turned to dirt.

We walked down until the contorting trees twisted and covered us. A long, clear, glassy stream followed us on the side. The trees took over the blazing sun, and the air was cool. A couple minutes later, we were back in the sun again. But this time, we were walking on heavier terrain. Rock. We walked up and up the hill, testing our feet on the uneven rocks. Deer were on the grass, frightened by us. They quickly sequestered themselves beneath the bushes and trees. We stopped to take a break. We crashed into a bench looking over the lower mountains. It was beautiful. I felt like I was on top of the world. We sipped water and continued on our journey to the top.

We got there. The trees were visible again. The gravel came back, and just a few feet ahead, a huge shimmering lake was right in front of us. A pure feeling of elation was felt by all of us. We walked up to this amazing site, and saw to our left, a big bridge to the meadows. Making the scene even more pretty. The lake was brown and blue. We took a seat in a crook almost touching the water. We ate our food and started to fuel up.

Down we went. The path different. We walked down the gravel another way, and down the rocks again. After about a mile, we were back on the ground. We looked at our maps. A bit lost. Able to get back. We tried walking up one way, backwards we did not know. We turned around. Went back. We climbed up another hill. Here we are Nicole said. I recognized the sign we passed before. We were back on the gravel again, we could see the path to the parking lot from here. Back in the neighborhood, we got in the car. Away from the beautiful, wonderful, California Woods.

~ Abby G.

3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the use of imagery. I was able to have a better understanding of where you were.
    -ME

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  2. I think that the descriptions were really well done. I could clearly picture where you were and the situation that you were in.

    -MA

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  3. I really like all of the description you used. I could see clearly what the image you were trying to get across was.

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