Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

The Perfect One

The clock strikes eight o’clock in the morning. I spring out of bed, put on a sweater, jeans, and my favorite pair of boots. Exactly twelve days before the big day, my family and I all hop in the car and drive out to Ticonderoga Farms in Chantilly, Virginia. My brother, sister, and I bolt out of the car and begin searching for the perfect one. The perfect one averaging about seven and a half feet. The perfect one with about a four and a half foot diameter. The perfect one with impeccable pines that glisten on the beautiful True Fir. There is always one that spots my eye. I gather everyone around, and we examine the tree. With assistance of the friendly employee we begin to cut. Once it falls, we place it on top of our car and drive back home. 

When we arrive back home, we hop out quickly, ready for the tree to come in. My mom begins to play some of my favorite Christmas tunes. Hot cocoa is being sipped and cookies are being eaten. We start stringing lights around the tree, the diameter lessening each section of branches. Now my favorite part, putting up the ornaments, one by one we find the perfect spots. Every year I rummage through the boxes to find my favorite one. Sphere shaped, covered with blue velvet, and engraved with my name in gold stitching. I contemplate and decide where to put my finesse of a structure. When I find the perfect spot way up high, I stretch my arm to place the special ornament on. Now that all of the ornaments are on, we now have to put up the glistening star. For the past eight years I always pull up a chair, stretch my arms and get on my tiptoes, reach for the tip of the tree and place the bright luminous star at the top of the tree. I hop down, and stare with glee as I stare at the beautiful Christmas tree.

~ Sophia B.

3 comments:

  1. Great job! Your descriptions are amazing!

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  2. Great job, Sophia! You really captured the magic of Christmas in this vignette :)

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  3. Great Job Sophia! This is really good and I agree with you Sarah that you captured the magic of Christmas!

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