Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

They Never Quacked Again

Every spring before 2009, ducks flew above my house and into the neighborhood pond. And every spring before 2009, my sisters and I would bring old bread and Cheerios to feed the ducks. 

As time went on, the pond grew dirtier and polluted. Green gunk appeared on the surface, and the bottom of the pond wasn’t visible anymore. Trash collected on the sides of the pond, and yet, the ducks still came and quacked their way through spring and summer. 

Seeing the contaminated pond, my sisters and I decided to save the ducks. Was it a stupid idea? Yes. But those ideas are usually the ones that turn out the best. 

We grabbed our old bread and box of Cheerios, and headed out towards the pond. On the way, we schemed. We came up with crazy plans, brilliant plans, and plans that sounded just impossible. 

When we arrived at the pond, my sisters grabbed the bread. They tore it up into tiny pieces and started tossing the bread at the ducks. Slowly, but surely, the ducks waddled their way away from the pond and towards us, their source of food. 

“We can keep them,” my sister reassured me. “They can live in the pond in our backyard.”

Four ducks toddled on the sidewalk, following my sisters and I. Four ducks whose heads bowed down every so often to reach the tiny pieces of bread on the ground. 

“We can’t do this,” I told my sister. “This is stealing. We’re going to be arrested for stealing ducks.”

Relax,” she replied. “It’s fine. We’re doing them a favor.”

But I didn’t relent.

Relax. 

I tugged on her sleeve, and I poked her. 

We’re going to be arrested for stealing ducks. 

I pleaded until my sister groaned and finally agreed. 

In the end, my sisters and I let the ducks go. We took off with the bread and Cheerios, leaving the four ducks in the dust. Leaving them to their filthy and murky pond. 

The next spring, the ducks didn’t come back. 

And every spring after 2009, the ducks never flew over our house and into the neighborhood pond. 

~ Mary Jane L.

3 comments:

  1. Love the broken up paragraphs :)

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  2. I really liked how lighthearted and humorous it was, and how you added dialogue for your sister.

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  3. Love the image of the ducks following you and your sister(:

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