Beijing was not a perfect city. There were many faults. Too many people, too many cars, too much pollution. It was also a beautiful city. After I got home from school, I would run through the complex of apartment buildings. It was called the Central Park apartments, which I found funny after I came to America. There was a mini park in the middle of the buildings with fountains and grey gravel roads that crunched under my feet. I would run up to the giant yellow statue in the the park and climb up the leg of the horse, and I felt like I could see everything. After I got tired, I would run through the street that had little cafes and grocery stores and get candy or ice cream.
I also loved how urban Beijing was. A minute away from our house was a giant mall that was split down the middle with a 300 ft long screen. As a child, I would stand under it for minutes, because I was so enchanted by the swirling colors and shapes that the screen constantly displayed. Twenty minutes away from our house, there was a mall that was like a combination of Tysons Corner and Tysons Galleria, with an additional two-hundred people. One of my favorite memories was seeing Up with my a few of my best friends and getting pizza afterwards.
The thing I loved most about Beijing though, was the people. The people I went to school with were international students who were mostly kids of ambassadors and politicians. I saw people of different races and cultures everyday. I would say hi to the old man with the eleven grandchildren who sold fruits on the corner. I would greet my British teacher who speaks no more than six words of chinese. I would run around with my friend who dad is an actor that just debuted a blockbuster film. Even though I’m in America, I hold a spot for Beijing in my heart.
~ Aileen L.
I really like how well you described Beijing and your life there.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive words, painted a clear image in my head.
ReplyDeleteI love how you set up your vignette. You start off with the things you miss and liked about Beijing, but at the end, you show the ultimate one - the thing you miss and love the most. I also loved how you describe the diversity of the people you knew - the grandfather, the British teacher, and the actor's daughter.
ReplyDeleteGood descriptions of the different aspects of Beijing
ReplyDeleteI love how you describe Beijing and the people who live there. The way you wrote your vignette was really good and you word choice was really strong.
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