Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Beijing

Beijing was not a perfect city. There were many faults. Too many people, too many cars, too much pollution. It was also a beautiful city. After I got home from school, I would run through the complex of apartment buildings. It was called the Central Park apartments, which I found funny after I came to America. There was a mini park in the middle of the buildings with fountains and grey gravel roads that crunched under my feet. I would run up to the giant yellow statue in the the park and climb up the leg of the horse, and I felt like I could see everything. After I got tired, I would run through the street that had little cafes and grocery stores and get candy or ice cream. 

I also loved how urban Beijing was. A minute away from our house was a giant mall that was split down the middle with a  300 ft long screen. As a child, I would stand under it for minutes, because I was so enchanted by the swirling colors and shapes that the screen constantly displayed. Twenty minutes away from our house, there was a mall that was like a combination of Tysons Corner and Tysons Galleria, with an additional two-hundred people. One of my favorite memories was seeing Up with my a few of my best friends and getting pizza afterwards. 

The thing I loved most about Beijing though, was the people. The people I went to school with were international students who were mostly kids of ambassadors and politicians. I saw people of different races and cultures everyday. I would say hi to the old man with the eleven grandchildren who sold fruits on the corner. I would greet my British teacher who speaks no more than six words of chinese. I would run around with my friend who dad is an actor that just debuted a blockbuster film. Even though I’m in America, I hold a spot for Beijing in my heart.

~ Aileen L.

5 comments:

  1. I really like how well you described Beijing and your life there.

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  2. Very descriptive words, painted a clear image in my head.

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  3. I love how you set up your vignette. You start off with the things you miss and liked about Beijing, but at the end, you show the ultimate one - the thing you miss and love the most. I also loved how you describe the diversity of the people you knew - the grandfather, the British teacher, and the actor's daughter.

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  4. Good descriptions of the different aspects of Beijing

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  5. I love how you describe Beijing and the people who live there. The way you wrote your vignette was really good and you word choice was really strong.

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