Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Winter Wonderland

I remember that day with a distinct consuming elation. It was the Eve of Christmas and my cousins and I were bubbled up with excitement, cooped inside our grandparents’ house. With our noses pressed against the glass, we gazed out the window longing, praying for little milky specs to fall from the sky. And then, finally, at the stroke of noon, it happened. Billions of glossy orbs began an elegant dance cascading from the heavens. 

Before the first clump kissed the ground, we were off. We tore ourselves from the window and flung on our jackets, gloves, hats, and boots in a hasty frenzy. Scurrying outside like little mice, we came upon a striking picture. The snow had (deftly) painted the grass, creating a shiny silver blanket. While admiring the snow globe microcosm, we were suddenly pelted with a snowball. 

Swiftly turning around to identify the unknown threat, we were flabbergasted to see our parents and grandparents standing fifteen feet away toting snowballs. And then, another chunk of snow was hurled at me, hitting me square in the face. We knew then. It was on. Crouching down, my cousins and I hastily gathered snow into small balls. Popping up to our feet smiling like cheshire cats, we lobbed the snowballs at our family. 

Laughing and grinning, we pelted each other before eventually we made our way inside, soaked from our head to our toes. I remember that day with a distinct consuming elation. It was a day filled with family and fun in our own little winter wonderland. 

~ Bridgett H.

9 comments:

  1. You know how I feel about this vignette! Awesome! The descriptions in this vignette are amazing!

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  2. I can picture this so vividly. I love the descriptions.

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  3. Your story really paints a picture in my head! It's so good!

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  4. Great Job! You have so many amazing details in your vignette.

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  5. I loved how you said "Eve of Christmas" instead of Christmas Eve, it gives a new meaning to the phrase.

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  6. This is so good, I love your use of vocab any how descriptive this piece is.

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  7. This is really good and I especially liked the part when you said "our own little winter wonderland". It was a great end to an amazing vignette.

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  8. This is amazing and so vivid- and i like how you described so snow at the beginning and how you repeated the first sentence at the end

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  9. Your descriptions are so vivid! This is amazing!

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