As we took the fence, I could feel the adrenaline rushing through me. Subsequently, I heard Andrew’s voice over the walkie talkie. “We’ve gotta hit the right flank. They’re concentrating on your side, because you have the majority of the men.” At least that’s what he thought. As I used my men to avert their attention, Andrew and two of my other friends went around to the other side of the house. I could see them from where I was and I saw immediately what was going to happen. The opposing force had seven men right where Andrew was going to enter, and I was too far away to do something about it. Their walkie-talkies had been turned off, and I could not get to him without attracting attention. I was able to snipe two of their men, and that got their attention, but it was not enough. As Andrew burst through the door of the fence, all havoc broke loose, and at the end, they had all canceled each other out. The remaining five orange team members on that side had been shot, but so had Andrew and my two other friends.
I then remembered overhearing the scouts back in the woods talking about how the Orange army planned to surround us in the woods, and that the plan had already been put in action. I then realized that we were going to be attacked from two sides, and that we would be sitting ducks. I started to yell for everyone to get back into the woods, and we all started retreating, but then, five people from the Orange army came out of the woods. As we tried to round to the other side of the fence, I realized that they were people from our team, in the scouts uniforms.
I as they jumped over the fence I thought we had tricked them, but they were not fooled. As my friends were hit with nerf bullets, I realized that our defense was breaking down, and that we were now surrounded by the Orange Army. What could I do now? How was I going to get out of this one?
~ Sebastian H.
Nice job! I like how you ended with a question.
ReplyDeleteThe way you made the Nerf battle seem like a real life war added another level of interest to your story.
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