Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Finally a Different Answer

I had asked for one my whole life. Ever since I could talk I had been asking. Ever since I could write it was on my Christmas list. Everyday I would push the point. “Can I have one” but the same answer every single time, “No.” I never gave up, I kept pushing my point, I never gave up. June 7, 2014 was my day. It was a saturday, my parents woke me up because my sister wanted to go to get another pair of shoes.  So while my mother and sister shopped, me and my father did what we always did, we went and looked at the puppies at the Petsmart next door. It was an adoption day, there were puppies everywhere. Different litters scattered everywhere. As usual my dad and I were playing with all the puppies when one litter caught our eye. My dad had always wanted a dog too, but my mother always thought the dog would get ignored because we are not home enough. Well, obviously something changed. We were playing with this one puppy whose name was Sven. He was nice and playful and as usual my sister and mom took forever, so we spent an hour with him. So I told my dad that I wasn't leaving without this dog. As usual he told me that my mom would never say yes and there was no use in trying. Somehow I talked my mom into coming and looking at him. I then poured as much guild from my childhood into her that I possibly could. She said yes but I hadn't even realized it. I put the dog down and began to walk out of the store. I was so used to be told no about getting a dog that it didn't even occur to me until my dad said it. That was one of the single best days of my life. Although he’s a handful, he always knows when I am angry or sad and comes up and makes it better. Even though it took almost 14 years to get a dog, every minute of fighting was worth it.  

~ Tristan N.

1 comment:

  1. That was truly an amazing day. May you and your partner be well.

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