Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Sisters

I never said you could borrow my sweater! It’s my favorite one! And now you ruined it! We’re sisters, Caroline, we’re supposed to love each other! But how can I love someone like you? I screamed at my sister. She stole my favorite aqua blue sweater and spilled spaghetti all over the front.

But I’m older, so I can do what I want! Go wash it for me so I can wear it tomorrow! she howled back at me, and violently slammed the door shut. The strength of her words knocked me down to the ground as I sobbed, the salty water falling onto the wooden floor. 

You are the worst sister ever! I wish I wasn’t born into this family! Ugh!

Caroline and I were the only two kids in our family, and we didn’t get along well. She took my clothes, so I took hers. She swore at me, so I swore at her. She told on me, so I told on her. But the worst part was, no matter how ridiculous she made her story sound, Mom always believed her. Never me. Because she’s older, and she would never do anything like what I described. It was as if we weren’t even sisters. 

I got up, kicked her door, stomped through the hallway, and slammed the door to my room shut.

Dawn, don’t slam the door! That’s been twice today!

MOM, that was CAROLINE before! Ugh! My mind started to race in a thousand different directions. How was I going to deal with this? What would my plan be? How would I make Mom believe me the one time I was making it up? Was I even going to do anything? Then, I got it. I was going to stay home from school and wait for my parents to go to work and Caroline to go to school. Then, I was going to set up a very intricate system of ropes and buckets and wires outside of her door. The hope was that she would get her foot caught on the string that was going to be set up that causes the giant bucket of paint to dump on her head. The paint was also going to be red, the color she hated most. Finally, the day came. 

Caroline and Dawn, come down to the kitchen! Dad and I need to tell you something! Mom announced. 

Ugh, but I wanna stay in my room! I yelled down to Mom and Dad, but I went anyway. Caroline and I sat down on the couch as far away from each other as possible, practically sitting on the armrest. 

Caroline, Dawn, Dad and I need to tell you something. We’re having another baby girl! 

Oh my gosh! I can’t believe it! I’m gonna have another baby sister! I get to experience it all over again! Caroline exclaimed. The smile on her face went from ear to ear. You know, it might seem like I hate you, Dawn, but deep in my heart, there’s a special place for you. A place where no one but a sister could ever be. I love you so much, Dawn. She hugged me as if we had never fought before. As if there were no tomorrow. As if she were my sister. My feet lifted off of the floor and I got this warm feeling in my chest. I hugged her back. 

I love you too, Caroline.

~ Sara F.

2 comments:

  1. Sara, this is really good! I like how you added on to it. I think that it adds more clarity. Great Job Sara!

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  2. <3 this is really cute and touching - i was hoping for a you know who fanfic though :))

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