I have to be getting it. Its the only thing I asked for. I’ve been good this year haven’t I? Well atleast they think I’ve been good this year. Oh jeez. What if I don't get it? Would I be kicked out of the mob for having the old equipment? Forget about the mob, how will I be able to have fun with my life without it. Oh and KK, ugh. She wants the other one. And so does Ashlande. How could they betray me like that. They think because I have the older version I don't need a new one. They think that its all the same. Those dense, foolish, vacuous Playstation 4 fans. Why would anyone want that piece of garbage? Why? Everybody knows the Xbox One is so much better than it. If my parents get KK and Ashlande a PS4 I will start to cry and probably run away or something. They won't get them one, my sisters don't even play video games. If I get what I want I would use it all of the time. So far all I have gotten is a gift card and a hat. Ok they are bringing out a box. That has to be my Xbox. It a tad bit thinner than I thought it would be. It kind of looks like a... oh no. Its not for me. That present is for KK. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. It can't be. Oh no its a PS4. WHY? WHY? How could they do this to me? I can already feel the tears coming down my eyes. The lump in my throat. But wait theres more. My dad brings out another box. Its about the same size as the PS4 box but slightly bigger. It looks exactly like the box for an Xbox. This one is for me my dad says. I run over to the box and and tear at the wrapping paper. I see the color green and a smile runs across my face. I got it.
~ Matt Ge.
Very intense and I can feel your emotion.
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ReplyDeleteI can very clearly see your sadness when you see the PS4 shaped box
ReplyDeletePs4 is a great present. It is a shame you like That Xbox 3 whatever
ReplyDeleteIts sad the you do not appreciate a gift like the Ps4. It was cheaper at the time, and it would have saved your parents money to spend on other things for you. Sad. So Sad
ReplyDeleteNice vignette and Xbox is better than Ps4
ReplyDeleteI can really feel your strong emotion for the Xbox One. Epic story.
ReplyDeleteWonderful job at building the tension.
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ReplyDeleteEpic. Legendary. Fo' real
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