Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Burgers

The sizzle of the moldy pink meat on the greasy hot stove pierces into my brain. I wipe the sweat speckled on my forehead as the pungent odor of fries and burgers waft into my nose. My mind wanders off, but my arm keeps on flipping the burgers in the same robotic movement. Everyday, I wake up to the screeching of my alarm, and head to work. I despise this job, I don’t know why I keep going here. 

The chime of the bell permeates throughout the building, my mind snaps back to reality, and I keep flipping. Then, out of nowhere, a behemoth of a creature confronts the entryway. His lard filled belly squeezes against the sides of the door, but it won’t give. Finally, he surges through the doorway while almost collapsing on his meaty legs. Every breath he takes looks like a struggle. Every step he takes looks as if he is about to crumple to the ground. And every time he talks, his chin starts bouncing like pieces of jello. His sweaty hand grasps the crinkled McDonalds bag, and he heaves himself to a booth. He tears open the bag with his stubby fingers, unwraps the cheap wrapping, and stuffs his face with as much food as possible. A mixture of saliva and “special” sauce leaks down his plump cheeks. Just thinking about him makes me want to spew out my breakfast. I see more of these people now, they are regulars, day in, and day out.

~ Hahn-Sol K.

8 comments:

  1. Great use of description

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  2. McDonald's is the best. Love the description

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  3. The beginning is descpritive

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  4. Your descriptions are really good! Nice Job Hahn-Sol!

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  5. Awesome description! Nice work!

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  6. great use of descriptive language in the beginning

    - Marshall

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  7. Very descriptive and funny. I love it

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