Potomac's eighth grade English students read and discuss The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros. The book is a series of short vignettes that together capture the characters, setting, and stories of a particular neighborhood in Chicago. The vignettes are written from the perspective of a fictional narrator and are based loosely on Cisneros's own experiences as well as those of her students. Some of the vignettes are humorous or action-packed; some are heart-wrenching or shocking. All are deliberate in their use of figurative language, poetic elements, grammar conventions, and pacing.

Each eighth grader composed at least one vignette for inclusion in this digital collection. They wrote in the style of Sandra Cisneros, as they interpreted it based on their notes and our class discussions, yet they set it in a time and place of their own choosing. While some of these vignettes are based on the author's personal experience, many of them are purely fiction, an imagining of characters and circumstances that seemed ripe for this assignment. Students also used this assignment to experiment with new vocabulary words and techniques involving punctuation and sentence structure.

We encourage you to leave comments below vignettes that strike you in some way. Please keep your comments positive and specific; this is not the place for critiques or suggestions. Enjoy the creativity and vibrancy of these students' literary efforts.

Wednesday, December 24, 2014

The Jeep

The Jeep is a great, green monster. In the evening, I wait and listen; when I hear its great roar I know it is coming. I know my Dad is home. It’s an enormous army green jeep, up high in the sky,  lifted up because of its huge, bulky wheels. My mother calls it a monster truck, but I don’t think the wheels are quite big enough. I know she is just kidding. A monster of a jeep, army green with rust in places; it is built to plow and skid through snow. Every winter my Dad is excited to drive it through rough weather. He proud of its ability to push through snow with ease. A green hulk plowing through. Roaring, roaring, silent.

It’s a miracle the neighbors don’t complain. In our old neighborhood the neighbors would try to politely mention the annoyance of the roar at 5 a.m. A great noise coming from my dad’s car as he zoomed off to work in the early hours of the morning. One of the reasons I got a sound machine. A rumbling roar, coming from the hull of the great jeep monster. The monster would become silent as soon as it was out of range, and the morning air would quiet. And then the noise would return at 7p.m, or 8 p.m., or sometimes 9 or 10 p.m., whenever my dad returned home. However, here the neighbors do not complain or even comment about the racket. Maybe it’s because here, the neighbors either have cars of their own, or do not care. Even so, it is still hard to miss an enormous green jeep. 

My mom’s car is very different from my dad’s. Her car is a 2002 Mercedes, which was purchased before my sister was even born. If you compared the two you would see a noticeable difference in size, although they fit the same number of people. The silent rumble of the tan Mercedes is like a whisper into the wind compared to the roar of the green monster. The Mercedes is parked expertly at the top of our circular drive, similar to a sparrow perched on a branch. Instead, the great green jeep occasionally sits a wheel or two in the muddy grass next to the driveway. Then it roars, out of the mud and onto the open road, nearly taking out the mailbox. But nevertheless, speeding off onto the cold pavement. Roaring at dawn, roaring at sunset.

~ Ellen O.

3 comments:

  1. The description you included in your vignette is great! I can really picture your dad's monster Jeep next to your mom's tan Mercedes. I like that you picked to write about something unique and something you see everyday while putting it under a microscope.

    Eleanor N

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  2. Ellen, I really like how you compared the two cars! This is a really good vignette! Great job!!! :)

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  3. I like how you call the jeep many different names during your vignette. "green monster" and "monster truck" are great names!

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